تدقيق لغوي ومراجعة - اللغة الانجليزية

Original (with errors): The sun was shining brightly as she walked to the park, her thoughts was preoccupied with work. She doesn’t realised that she was already 10 minutes late for her meeting. The path was crowded with people, some walking slowly, others talking loudly. She wanted to tell them to be quiet, but she felt too rushed to do so. When she reached the park, she saw her friends sat on a bench, waiting for her. She quickly apologized for being late, and they all laughing about it. Proofread Version: The sun was shining brightly as she walked to the park, her thoughts preoccupied with work. She didn’t realize that she was already 10 minutes late for her meeting. The path was crowded with people, some walking slowly, others talking loudly. She wanted to tell them to be quiet, but she felt too rushed to do so. When she reached the park, she saw her friends sitting on a bench, waiting for her. She quickly apologized for being late, and they all laughed about it.